Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Pain and Perfection

Why is the inner critic such a fucking BITCH?

Can't she just shut the fuck UP sometimes?

Why must she comment on every little thing I do: oooooh, that's ok, for *you* I guess, but it could be better!

I'm drowning her in words to shut her up. 5k/day. Hopefully, I'll kill her outright.

(And that's a perfectly good use of the word "hopefully." It's a minor clause, and creates a certain tone for the sentence. (Many) grammarians agree: it's part of the "honestly" and "frankly" group).

Bye-bye bitch (until I need you again, at the end of the story, and during draft two of my novel).

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