Cosmic Dissonance

As a reader, I love:

STRUCTURE
Momentum
Emphasis on cause and effect
Beginning-Middle-End
Intricate

LANGUAGE
Informal
Fast-paced
Colorful

SETTING
A slice of (emotionally foreign) life
Exotic in any way-- that could as well mean American suburban as ancient Egyptian

CHARACTER
Morally hazy

Is that what I write? Should it be?